My poetry collection
I can't say that I liked the poetry. Nice attempt at sexual humour, but the lines are neither vivid enough, nor funny enough. Also, you've misspelled "limerick".Sorry, mate.
thanks for pointing out the error.I appreciate it.well limericks are about humor and obscenity. yeah, it's a failed attempt. i had something in mind, it didn't turn out the way i wished.m sleepy.well if u see from another angle, you might find something different. Thanks for reading :)
i liked it, especially the 'please help to move stuffs'. Nice take on the picture
Clever - I can imagine the whole scene!
Now that is a Hotty.!! Cute..bkm
I could picture the scene as well. I love the imagination and the photograph...well that is my dream home...I hope it is in Ireland or Scotland.
Wow - this is the second limerick I have read today. WOW! How odd is that? You have some fun word combinations: I enjoyed it completely. My Completely NON Limerick Magpie.
bet she got the help she needed. smiles. playful magpie
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