14 Sep 2010

Somehopes




Somewhile ago, I had lost all hope and was in tears
Something, told me to keep fighting to win you back
Somewise words rejuvenated my aims with new vigor
Somebody get me a short cut to catch the lost time
Sometimes, I keep my trust in intuition than in fate
Sometime, that is what I need now to catch some air  
Somedeal, I need it badly to settle myself down soon
Someway, I hope you will find a path to get to my side
Someday, surprisingly, we will get back together, I feel  
Somehow, beating all the odds with will of our hearts
Somewhen, when you will be with me, I have a surprise
Someplace, I want to take you to, green and cloudy, also
Somewhere, on a beach, to enjoy the glow of sunshine
Somewhat, in a hilarious mood with graceful relief in eyes   



 Images thanks to : dangerousandbeautiful & technoparktoday

14 comments:

Brian Miller said...

some rather fun word play here...i like the way youe set this up and the use of different colors for the start of each line...it is visually appealing and your words do not disappoint as well...nice one shot...

gautami tripathy said...

Now I like what you did here. We all need those somes!

nowhere island

Glynn said...

Someday, your hope may be realized. Nice one.

dustus said...

Perfect title for your creative post. Agree with Brian, enjoyed the wordplay. Nice One Shot!

TALON said...

I love how it starts off in a place of despair and ends in a place of hope. Lovely!

Shashi said...

Interesting way...
Like it..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya

Eric Alder said...

"Some way, some day,
Baby, I'll understand you" - Marshall Crenshaw

Beachanny said...

You intertwined all those somes into the sum of your desires. Very clever. Thank you. Gay (@beachanny)

Carrie Burtt said...

Love what you did with this...it is awesome. :-)

the wid0w said...

very cleverly constructed and a pleasure to read.
looking forward to reading more of your work

Jingle said...

hope is waiting for you to grab,
love your style.
beautiful and creative.

Kathleen Overby said...

Hope and love. Love and hope.

Pete Marshall said...

and sometimes isnt it great to read wonderful poetry....enjoyed this..cheers pete

kavisionz said...

And Someposts, like yours, are a real treat to the eyes!!
Really enjoyed this visually appealing poem.. and your wordplay was so cool! Loved the story of hope you've laid out here...