4 Oct 2010

Soul in rain



It rained like the drizzle of souls
It reminded me of a beautiful soul
She loves the rain crazily just as me


She is beyond the miles I could cover
She is beyond the reach of my hopes
She is beyond the grasp of my dreams
She is beyond the realms of my prayers




But, as I closed my eyes, I saw her enjoying rain
By letting the blessed rain to baptize her lost soul
Embracing the healing nectar from the heaven
She flapped her hands like wings of a dove
To feel the freedom she craved all her life
She encircled the rain like a dazzling top
Splashing the droplets allover tangentially


Her artistic feets created a swirl on rainy floor
Then she stood still to take a deep breath of sigh  
She closed her hopeful eyes to make a dearest wish
She folded her hands at once like twin bowls of wishes
She collected the sweet droplets of rainy desires
To fill her heart with fresh desires for the future
As she wished to erase her broken dreams


When she opened her eyes, she saw me
Her eyes sprinkled the rays of joyous smile
I leaned forward to catch her shivering hand
For a walk through the deserted street in rain
But, to my surprise, she gingerly ran past me
With a shy smile, challenging me to catch her  
But I stood frozen watching her crazy antics
Dancing like a little girl forgetting everything


I wished to freeze the mood in her heart forever
So that she don’t have to shed her tears and hide it  
While drenching in a chilly rain, defying the lightening
The glimpse of her curves tangled in drenched drapes
Left my lustful eyes mesmerized in the glory
Of being a twin soul to a honest girl
As she doesn’t veil her heart
When she is with me
As she loved being herself
In my company through the years  


She shrugged me off from my naughty thoughts
While holding my hand and asking for a walk
Yet she didn’t miss out on mocking me
With her unique black humor


We shared some lighter moments in that rain
We breached the barriers of silent sorrow
With the warmth of our hopes of a life together
Noise from somewhere vanished my daydream abruptly  
And I opened my eyes to traverse my lonely journey as usual




Check bridgetchumbley blog carnival for writings on the theme healing.For me rain is the best healer. :)

19 comments:

Jingle said...

dynamic, fun, and romantic.
your poem makes me smile!

Nithin R S said...

I am glad that it made you smile :) this is a special poem for me. thanks for reading :)

Teresa said...

You create wonderfully vivid pictures in your poetry. Very nice.

amblessedbeyondmeasure said...

Loved it! I love this type of poetry!

Nithin R S said...

teresa and amblessed, thanks for reading. :)

Jingle said...

Thanks for linking,
visit poets near your entry if you can.
Cheers!

Glynn said...

This was cool. You used the pictures and words effectively together to create something new. Well done.

Kevin said...

Beautiful! Love it!

cesargealogo said...

I do really love when the rain starts pouring I felt refresh. Your words speaks reality.

buttercup600 said...

Amazing imagery and the pictures is just spectacular!! Weel done xx

tasithoughts said...

Such a homage. Loved it!

deadpoet88 said...

This is amazing! Wonderful imagery, so romantic and passionate. Beautiful poem :)

klarocca2010 said...

Such beautiful pictures to accompany your poem. I really loved it.

caryjo said...

WOW! I loved the way the words and pictures were coordinated and ran together beautifully.

And I, too, "usually" love rain.

Bridget Chumbley said...

Such amazing pictures and lovely words. Thanks for sharing with us!

Nithin R S said...

Thanks to all of you for reading this poem and for your comments :)

Jingle said...

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-beaches-and-mountains.html
Our poetry potluck is NOW open, welcome linking in..

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/

awards for you.

Reflections said...

Stunning, dynamic, much depth... good write.