31 Jan 2011


Between your heart and mine
The bridge is trembling as if it will rupture
Dark clouds have blinded the vision
And, I’ve lost my direction
The vibes say, I need to stay calm
Daylight will come with new ideas
When the path is clear
The journey becomes easy; I doubt it!
Night is always a dangerous ally
Is  it trustworthy? I never found so!
Beginning of the end, or a new start
To me, it’s a new lesson to grasp
Lowering my ambitions is never an option
Comes with it, serious trouble
A path to discover towards safety
Pause or move forward with grit
In the opposite side, there is a cavalry
The fiercest opponents ready to strike
Day’s so long and so humid
Occupations never keep me satisfied
That, my wish is to conquer your heart
Is there any arrow left in my armor? No!
Known paths are all blocked
As my every move is well anticipated
The brave heart in the
Children’s stories will succeed in the last
Hour, that’s fantasy! But, reality bites.

Written on the prompt 
"Between the dark and the daylight,
When the night is beginning to lower,
Comes a pause in the day’s occupations
That is known as the Children’s Hour" @  
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Jingle said...

you could be super creative.

love your take.
well penned.

Whitesnake said...

Oh My I like this!

Something I have done before........LOVE IT!

Gloria said...

I think this is just a brilliant take on the Carry on Tuesday prompt. Really enjoyed it!!

Nithin R.S. said...

Jingle, Whitesnake and gloria, thanks for reading and for encouraging me. :)

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Well done. A lovely take on the prompt.