26 Jan 2011

I Like You

I’m flattered

Like a lonely frosty lake
In sight of a surprising sunshine
Keen to warm up all the frozen senses
Easing away the droplets of fear in my soul

Your eyes have left me blind with its sacred shine  
Out voicing my heart with your all conquering words
Unfolded my life, instilling a desire to steal your heart

Written on  Prompt F @  acrosticonly +  oneshotpoetry  . Thanks! Images thanks to Google.


One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

the simplicity of the sentiment and the way you put this together really caught my eye...loved the word choices that went with YOU...cheers pete

Kavita said...

Awww.. how romantic!! I can relate to this one, Nithin..
The sacred shine of those eyes have left me blinded enough to see anything but them! :)

This is a beautiful one shot!!

Johny said...

Hey pete and Kavita, thanks for reading. :)

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Beautiful words .. welcome to Acrostic Only ..

I love romantic poetry that is executed well.

Johny said...

Thanks Amias, your blog has been my inspiration for acrostics. :)

Chris G. said...

Aw, now there's a sweet little acrostic...and so true. A glance alone can quell fears, ignite passion, and steal us away...lovely sentiments.