Two legs surfaced on an idle lake
Made the sleepy leisure hunters abruptly anxious
A weird hat in the vicinity
Added fire to the intensity
Until a pretty girl rose like a dolphin
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23 comments:
I adore the evocative image of the girl rising like a dolphin. The faucet does look like a strange hat! Beautiful, quirky piece. I like it. A lot!
Glad that you liked this limerick.This is certainly an encouragement to write more. :)
lovely imagination,
adorable Magpie!
I LOVE the unexpected!!
Totally unique and a clever interpretation of Willow's photo!
Jingle,Dana and Helen,thanks to all of you for reading :)your comments gives confidence to write. have a nice day.
Nithin I love this...the imagery is awesome. :-)
Thanks. This imagery is the prompt for this poetry.
Love this limerick! Very fun twist on the photo
Thanks Kathew.
I am so pleased it has a happy ending.
I like it, your words for this photo are so original. L love these words 'a pretty girl rose like a dolphin, beautiful imagery.
Thanks Angie and Marilyn. Glad that you liked that line. I wondered how it will look when i wrote it. image courtesey: magpietales.
Damn! I missed her emergence. All I saw was the hat and feet, neither all that pretty!
Stafford Ray ... lol :P well, you try to see her emergence in one of your sweet dreams :D thanks for reading. :)
Oh, what an image this is!
Yeah , i felt the same..when i first saw it..magpie tales have great choice of pics.
thanks for reading :)
..a pretty girl rose like a dolphin…evocative imagery with a playful feeling..nice
my magpie is here
ha. nice play... a rather surreal magpie...like the imagery though. very nice.
my magpie
nice read with a happy ending...my kind of read...bkm
Claudia, Brian and Signed, thanks alot for reading. :)
The mystery you created was too good! And the, the fiiiine end.. Serves those hunters right! :)
Well played, Nithin!
Kavisionz, thanks for your compliment. :)
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