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Miles To Go To Say Goodbye
Life moves on, as ever
Life moves on, as ever
The faces of people change
Whom I meet, talk to, befriend
Hundreds came and went
Leaving good memories forever
Without a trace to see again
But it's part of life
A few remains for long
Sharing good and bad times
But there are times;
When there is no life left,
In the beautiful friendship
Even though how good it has been!
Words and deeds can turn it,
into nothing more than trash.
Even though the heart doesn’t want,
To end the relationship.
Issues are too hot to handle
Efforts to revive it go in vain.
Hopes of getting back the warmth,
Fades just like an evening sun.
There comes the thought of
Saying good-bye.
But a goodbye can’t take away
The feelings inside the heart!
It will remain there forever.
So maybe an unrelenting wait,
Or an unfettering effort to forget,
Whichever may be the path
walk through it slowly
walk through it slowly
As even if a full-stop is drawn
It doesn't mark the end of memories
It doesn't mark the end of memories
So there are miles to go
To say goodbye!
I wrote this poem some years back. It's not a goodbye. It's rather miles away from saying goodbye.
Image courtesy: Thanks to ianrapture
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16 comments:
A nice poem :)
Gud luck :)
Shruti
Thanks for reading. Good luck to you too. :)
i somehow like ur name! and i c ur blog has something very positive. Honestly, your poem touched me deeply. all the very best for BAT. am glad i came here.
restless
Well, i don't know your name. But i am glad that you liked my poem. I wish to spread hope through words.Well, thanks for visiting my blog. Hope that you will finally find peace that has eluded you.
Loved the idea esp 'But a good bye can’t take away The feelings inside the heart!It will remain there forever.' No matter how much we try to convince ourselves that it is over.it isn't over until it actually is.All the best!:)
Yeah, the more you try to convince your heart, it becomes even difficult to get over it. So its always better to leave it on its own,as with time, it will move to the stacks of memories. Thanks for reading. All the best :)
Miles to say Goodbye, a great way of presenting the thoughts and memories...
All The Best for BAT 13.
gmsaravana - Goodbye
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special
I really liked your story. Thanks for visiting my blog. :)
Nice and sweet poem!
ATB for BAT13
Gkam - Goodbye
very nice poem. "Miles to say goodbye". Actually I also wrote on not saying goodbye.
I so very can relate to this poem ... i have this friend ...once a very good friend...still a friend...but after hundreds of fights..u loose the will to continue..
This just gives words to my thoughts!!
All the best for BAT!!!
Reluctant goodbyes are the most painful. I can totally relate to your post.
All the best!
crazy poet playing with words is about right
u can call me RESTLESS. And so thoughtful of u to say may iget peace which has eluded me!
thanks! I see u participate in alot of contests! that's interesting! i shall be contesting with u soon in poetry!!
take care!
RESTLESS
That was an interesting piece of poetry Nithin.. Indeed it can be really hard and painful to bid farewell to someone with whom u have shared joys and sorrows of ur life.. ATB :)
Thanks all of you for your encouragement. Sorry for late reply.I was on a break. Will cheer up all of you in the next BATON. :)
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