11 Jan 2011

Fogged Lake



A vast lake
Dressed up in early morning fog
She is waiting for her lover, the sun
Grey sky shaded its waterscape
Without waves, she is looking so calm


A small country boat positioned itself
In the middle of the deep trench
For catching some sleepy fishes
A lonely crow slowly flew across
As if searching for someone
At a distance, another boat raced through
Creating a channel of wave in a straight line
From one shore to the another


The grey fog has spoiled the trees around
They were silent as if it’s freezing
On the outer, the lake looked serene
I wonder how deep the water is!
Though beautiful, it’s salty to drink
But, it’s tempting to breach its depth
When I look through the window of this train

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6 comments:

moondustwriter said...

What a delightful view form the train and a delight for us to read.

I'm am swept into the mist

thanks for sharing with One Shot

Brian Miller said...

you capture a beautiful scene and played it well in words for us...nicely done. great one shot.

Kavita said...

Loved loved loved this one, Nithin!! What a beautiful picture you have painted with your words here... and that twist towards the end was like WOW! All the while, I kept thinking you were probably sitting on the lake shore or something.. only to realize that it was but a passing moment "felt" from within a train!
Very engaging!

Shashi said...

Many times I have come across this scene and can relate to your verse so much as I love travelling by train.... very beautiful verse...


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Johny said...

Thanks to all of you for your comments :)

Steve Isaak said...

Solid images, solid work.