Waited like a lonely beautiful newlywed bride
Patiently
To start the journey of new life with husband
Nervous
Yet slowly adjusting to her new home
Scared
Yet her heart brimmed with dreams
Until
He showered down from the sky
Erasing
Away all her fears and worries
His smile
Filled her heart with an aura of belief
Her heartbeats
Driven by her emotions ran like a racehorse
She shivered
As he walked in slow-motion towards her side
He overheard
The rhythm of her nascent heartbeats for him
His touch
Left her heart and soul frozen for a moment
She smiled
With a flavour of shyness of her entire life
They embraced
For the first time with passion
Dissolving
The souls as one forever
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11 comments:
nice analogy "night n rain" so deep meaning...
lovely, the rain drops are vibrating!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
welcome to week 4 poetry potluck.
Jingle. Thanks for reading and for inviting me. I was about to check for this week's potluck. I liked the concept.have a nice week :)
Lovely form - the single phrase followed by explanation. Beautiful thoughts; it's all about the love, isn't it? Thanks! I just joined the Jingle-rama too! Isn't she the best?
Amy Barlow Liberatore
it's about the relation between night and rain, through the souls of a newly wed couple. thanks for reading :) yeah she is best!
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Happy Thursday!
Yes a perfect couple..and I love both of them.. the night and the rain...
I enjoyed reading the same...
What a beautiful imagery.. and the scene you have painted...
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Nice comparison, they go well together.
Beautiful poem, I loved the analogy to rain
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