Bring a new spring into my barren life
Erasing the thorns of past from memory
My heart is waiting with roses of hope to welcome you
Yearning to drizzle love in your heart like a monsoon
Vast seasons await our journey together
Across the world with the wings of dreams
Let me show all the wonders you wish to see
Elating you to the skies, fulfilling your wishes
Nurturing your smile like a classic portrait
Teasing your eyes with silent acts of drama
I wish to hold your hand for rest of my life
Negating all the lows and rooting all the highs
Emptying your sorrows with a touch of magic
16 comments:
how intense the feeling of love.. Happy Valentines'!!
Thanks Priyanka, Wish you and your husband a happy valentines day! :)
love this,
reading it is a true bliss,
Happy V Day.
Phew.. quite heart felt words.. Great Keep it up bro..
Beautiful Touching Phrases. Fantastic Fabulous!
Very intense! Happy valentine's day to you too!
The intensity pulls the reader through the depths of sensitivity and light. Nice.
Sensitive and touching dedication to the heart, here - hope the Valentine's day treated you well!
a beautiful valentine...drizzle love like a monsoon...that rocked...
Nice wordplaying. :) A wonderful dedication to the day of hearts with some lovely imagery.
Thanks alot for your encouragement. :)
Hi Nithin
Sweet Valentine...
Hope you shared with yours...;-)
I liked it...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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WOW!! That was intense and so so romantic, Nithin!! Very beautifully composed! Lucky is the recipient of this lovely love-filled note..
A sweet one shot!
Greetings, how are you?
Your absence is missed, hope you well…
Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!
Hope to see you in,
Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.
Cheers.
xoxox
thanks for all your comments. after a long silence, i am hoping to wake up with words soon. :)
love your blog, your poetry is impressive!
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an old poem would work.
:)
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