18 Feb 2011

Goodbye



I am moving to a new shore
I have left a piece of my heart
At your door
Without knocking, like a trespasser
I hope you will open the door
I wonder if you will see it
It holds a piece of my dreams
Which I wished to share with you
It still carries the urn of my feelings
That I never expressed
I wished to conquer your heart
Silently, with a feather touch of emotions
Now, you are beyond my reach
As you have found your destiny
I wish to hold your smile
In my eyes forever as a precious gift
I still hear your voice, when I am alone
Through the realms of my ears
I don’t wish to see tears or fury
In your eyes
As I love it to remain vibrant
So, I won’t leave any words
That might hurt your beliefs
Though I wish to let you know
I’ve fallen for you
Right when I saw your eyes greeting me

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13 comments:

Mike Patrick said...

Very moving. Perhaps that door can open again.

Jingle said...

wow, stunning imagery.
the footsteps leave me wonders and

love love your style.

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DuDo said...

loved the flow bro... yes you are a true wordplayer

Regards
DuDo

Here is one of my scribbling….
http://dudoism.blogspot.com/2011/02/be-still.html

fiveloaf said...

wow! nicely conveyed.. here's my wk 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

very intense feelings of love... good wrk

Harshika said...

awww.. so sad

a beautiful write :)

Amity said...

when God closes a door, He opens a window...:)

intense feelings portrayed! lovely!

Brian Miller said...

nice word play...and quite the feeling you stir...

dhitermination said...

Waw, I feel sad really. This poem breaks my heart. T.T

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jovir@cebu urbano said...

a work of art you got here. more power always!

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