23 Aug 2010

Pensive






Pile of thoughts nailed me in a wily looP
Egged me towards my forgotten desirE
Naïve heart chased a blind redemptioN
Settled for small wishes and silly glorieS
Instead of challenging the waves of alibI
Voices of emotions urged me to be a leV
Ending the era of losses towards ablazE





*Lev : Yiddish name meaning lion.*Alibi : regrets 
This poem is written on prompt # "pensive" for participating in the onesingleimpression blog carnival. Please visit to read other writer's works. Thanks :) Images courtesy : fc00.deviantart & an-cat-dubh

10 comments:

Claudia said...

wow - this is fantastic
my favorite line is…settled for small wishes and silly glories Instead of challenging the waves of alibi

Brian Miller said...

you have taken acrostic to a new level having it front and back...nicely played!

Saumya said...

Wow, this really takes a lot of skill! I love it; fantastic job!

The Write Girl said...

What a creative poem...I love the double acrostic.

RiikaInfinityy said...

I am loving this! Truly amazing words and structure =D

Ramesh Sood said...

Poem is no doubt excellent.. but it appears to have come out of focused and dedicated effort of a sculptor of words.. it just can't happen otherwise.. I salute you for this extraordinary creation..

and humbly invite you also to visit.. A Little More Than Ordinary , my page to bless my 100th post and also to laugh a bit

Nithin R S said...

Thanks to all of you.Claudia, Brian,Saumya,The write girl,rikaalinfinityy and Ramesh.

I really wondered if people will like this. I am relieved.

Well Mr.Ramesh, you are right. It's more of crafting.Getting the right words for ending each line with the kind of meaning i wished was a tough task.To be fair had to search intensely and had to change the lines to suit the words i got to make the poem as it looks now. But somehow i love this format. Once again, thanks alot to all of you for reading. :)

Tumblewords: said...

Well crafted! Enjoyable read...

gautami tripathy said...

This is really very done!

a trophy

Nithin R S said...

tumblewords and gautami, thanks for the comments. :)